deslona's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The free tutorial]

Cluttered

It was hard to read... Almost impossible
Need a button to turn off the music.

It seemed cluttered. Maybe you should enlarge Flash size so you can have the screenshots and text separate.
You need to do this again I think.
But there should be a Tut' for this. As it is a free flash maker and people cannot afford Macromedia'

Raptor-Llama responds:

Ok, when I have the time I'll edit it to make it look better.

[TLOEG Soundboard]

Nice soundboard

For next time -
Make all the buttons in the same places (the pictures section for example)
Test all the sound buttons first (one didn't work - "Getting old")

I do not understand the point of the "Track 14" section.

I liked the backgorunds and graphics, especially the intro screen and the effect there. Very nice.

Frenzy responds:

Fixed the Getting Old button; yeah I tried to make all the buttons in the same place, but then I would edit all of them; Ill try that next time though...

the track 14 is just a little extra I included.

Sorry if I confused you with this response... lol

Thanks for the review and great score!

~ Z

[Balls!]

Good game

It would be nice if it had some sound and/or music. I enjoyed playing it though good job!

AlexHeaton responds:

Thanks :)
I decided to have no music to get rid of the load time. Its such a small game even 56k users can load it almost instantly.

[Platform tutorial V.1.3]

This was going really really well...

until I 'played' your game that does not work AT ALL - Sorry I have to blam this - If a tutorial is made wrong or there are obvious flaws it shouldn't be let on NG.
But if it worked you were looking at a '3/5' minimum. I like what you did with the 'right click buttons'.

Djmr responds:

They do, press down before landing.

[Monty Python Songs V2]

Opps!

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 0.9065 to 2.0847!
If this game is protected you will get a PROTECTION point!

Did I do that? :D
Thanks

GallagherProductions responds:

you did and thank you

[The Monty Python Songs]

Thanks for voting, deslona!

How can you wrong with monty python?

Your experience points gave you a voting power of 5.38 votes. Your blam and protection points gave you an additional 22% of your experience power, meaning that your total vote power was worth 6.57 votes!

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 1.7620 to 1.8131!
If this game is protected you will get a PROTECTION point!

MORE SONGS FOR NEXT TIME! MORE MORE MORE!
*every spearm is sacred...?*
If this gets blammed can you send everything to my email in my profile (the review wont let me type it in here)

GallagherProductions responds:

i do have that one thats definatly going to be in version 2

[Boy Ninja]

Very ... WOW

This was really good! I liked it, I hope you will expand on this, I cant wait if you do.
Please let me know if you will make a newer version

oldryan responds:

Thanks! as a matter of fact i am!

[Flash Tips 1-3]

excellent

Perfect, just what i was looking fo
Especially the Load/save feature, I CAN UNDERSTAND IT!!!!

FLiXD responds:

Good. Its's actually really easy; it's just not very well-publicised

[The Gaming Certificate]

Needs a little work

Unlike the last submission ill keep it short and sweet.
How do you 'save'?
There should be 'skip' buttons
Tone the sound abit
Again 'the most/best' is an opinionated question.
And if you have to use it state 'whos' opinion it is first

thats all

SepirothX responds:

The save points occur after every 3 certificates. I should of put skip buttons but I didnt think ppl would hav to watch them over and over again. The sound was bad to keep the file size low. I wont put opinionated questions in the final fantasy certificate

[pingpong-unlimited]

hmmm

It'd be nice to see all of my bat..

nice music tho

but another game that has been overdone - make some changes (big) please for next time

game-unlimited responds:

K