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[Star Work Episode 2]

It is a little funny

It is okay. The jokes were okay. But I didn't really get into it. I liek the idea though. And the changing scenes give it more depth and add to the story (which is a good idea)

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

Fair enough. Next one will have like a thousand different scenes

[Stairs Can be Dangerous]

It's okay for a short

Cute and short, but too short. I think you should continue this basic theme but make it longer and more characters, it seems a little Madness-esque. There was alot of the frame area you did nothing with, maybe a little more movement would be good in the next one too. Sound effects were good and well timed.

JV2 responds:

lol, Sound effect. Singular. I thought of adding a background, but then i remembered i had to make one so...

anyway good ideas

[FlashBack 00]

Area fights are almost always good

Nice animation and effects - flashbacks, slowmotion. I like the idea of an arena free for all. The story was great. I hope you will do more. The only thing I dodn't like was there was no sound at all at the beginning of the movie, so I wasn't sure if it was all silent or not.
Also I think the replay button doesn't work?

EvilSeed responds:

yeah, thanks, the preloader works but i put gotoandstop instead of gotoandplay, stupid me, but is fixed now, anyway, glad you liked it.

[Pico's Rush to PicoDay]

Funny

Smooth animation, the voices sounded a little scratchy. The joke was cock joke was good. I would have liked to have seen this longer. That is the only grip I had with this..

SardonicSamurai responds:

Yeah, I used a different mic, and I guess I had my mouth closer to my mic then usual (usually I have to put it on my table and talk away from it T_T) but I was retarded.

[A Pico Thing]

Good stuff

Good intro, I was wondering if it was the submission haha.
When I saw the real animation I thought 'wow'. It wasn't too short like most of the other pico day submissions I have seen so far.
I like the blam tank idea, most amusing. But the music seemed a little - strange? It was good but parts of it just seemed ot to fit with the animation.

ActiveObjectX responds:

yeah...the music is my least favorite part about this movie....oh welllllllll/

[Pico Epilogue]

Unexpected

I like the use of the in-game graphics. A little melodramatic at the beginning - but that was what you were going for. I was hoping it could have been a little longer. The joke was well done. But you had the potential at the beginning to do so much more...

JohnnyUtah responds:

well, i storyboarded and drew this out and we finished it off rather quickly. its not our best work, but I hope you liked it.

[PicoDay: PathwayThroughNG]

Excellent

I like the style, by travelling through NG and seeing the different styles of animation. I like the 'messages' and voice are a treat. I would have liked it to flow more - it felt a little stati. But over all fantastic.*thumbs up*

calcoA responds:

Thank you very much, I agree, some parts were static but I still think our overall effect turned out quite well.

[stickman ball]

Unexpectedly good

When I see a movie with sick figures I think 'here we go again - another boring stick vs stick move'

It was another stick VS stick movie - some very good visual effects thrown in. Good timing with the sounds. How the stickmen jumped into the pool looked 'wrong'.
(pls respond)

zonic123 responds:

thanks i apperciate it...i shuld of tried harder but there u go thanks for the reveiw :)

[AvP Review Review]

Cracked up laughing..

I could tell you were australina after the first 3 seconds (despite the helium) haha...

Seriously that was funny - your right - I haven't seen this particular movie but I have seen others. I can't see what all the hype is about myself either.

Gerkinman responds:

we Auzzies sound very distinct. And are often sexy and manly *strikes a pose for no real reason*

[Creativity]

Very good, funny to the MAX.

Is that a true story? Probably not, but it gets a 4

But now you *have* to make another one. (or just be lazy so your roommate can take more pictures)

toad2000 responds:

It's not the least bit true, although I do tend to procrastinate that much when working on assignments I don't care about.